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An Ode To the Scavenger

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(1) Strophe Slowly and slowly fly the mighty feathers: the uncanny wrath bearer, the poacher's prey, the bald bizzare stigmatic cryptic creature, the ecology's majestic role player; the curtain raiser of ecosystem's air purifier. Alas! Your iconographic role is omitted, you, the saviour of the mortal race from the contagious diseases. Astounded! How you uncontaminated dear environment. Your poaching has taken away the soul of the balanced ecosystem; crucial is saviour friend's presence, on the verge of extinction plight might have horrid ripple effect! (2) Antistrophe Irony! The friend's void can't be substituted by mere replicas of sustainable development; the diminishing existence will drastically affect the local food webs! How alluring to have a glimpse of the hunch and tuck of the bird's head in the cold, flapping and fluttering the wings, stretching the neck in the heat! You, remain aloft for hours, soars gracefully on long broad wings; with dazzling sharp eyes from the highlands to pick the carrion! (3) Epode Your iconographic presence is being honoured by the myths, legends, fables of civilizations from ages. High time to contemplate, to introspect, to jump into the ecosystem's integral bandwagon: as pivotal to rescue and redeem the bird's friendly endangered existence! All Rights Reserved © Silpika Kalita

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Date: 11/29/2021 3:05:00 PM
Hello Silpika ... beautifully written on a topic too few realize. Without scavengers, everything else would be in peril including humanity - thanks for this fine verse Silpika - Lindsay
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Silpika Kalita
Date: 11/30/2021 8:33:00 AM
Dear Lindsay, ample thanks for visiting and an insightful review of the importance of the role play of the scavengers. Much appreciate it... Silpika
Date: 11/25/2021 12:23:00 AM
'Thou, remain aloft for hours, soaring gracefully on long broad wings; With dazzling sharp eyes from the highlands to pick the carrion!' Do you have any particular bird in mind, the eagles or vultures? Sad that many bird species are on the brink of extinction !The scavengers do the cleaning work and their disappearance will really rot the Earth. Your carefully chosen world play is to be applauded! Great poem in thought content and style , Silpika
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Silpika Kalita
Date: 11/25/2021 3:21:00 AM
Thanks for such an insightful delightful review Valsa! This composition I wrote as a part of Save The Vulture campaign to generate awareness about the importance of their presence. Glad you like!
Date: 10/29/2021 4:26:00 PM
A wonderful ode to the scavenger Silpika, they have an important role to play - taking waste away that would otherwise rot and decay… Belle
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Date: 10/30/2021 5:15:00 AM
Indeed Belle! Sad part is the drastic declining ratio! High time to ponder!
Date: 10/20/2021 10:09:00 PM
Undoubtedly, scavengers have their crucial role to play, working unassumingly, that we may see nature’s beauty around us, untarnished
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Date: 10/20/2021 11:25:00 PM
Dear poet, thanks for such insightful review! Indeed they are! Most of them are endangered, need care!
Date: 10/20/2021 2:04:00 AM
Hey Lee thanks for the review! it was an impromptu for the campaign of save the Vulture for the conservation of our ecology. Glad that you liked. Silpika
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Date: 10/20/2021 12:35:00 AM
I like the way you juggle the words, it makes me have to think about the meanings. Keep up the good work, Lee
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