An Empty Head

Sometimes he feels like a museum on
a Monday - empty, desolate, withdrawn
from the celestial library where not 
yet written prose and poetry are stored.
A sleep-deprived, he walks around the rooms,
he curses rhymes and rhythms, he assumes
a pledge to give it up, to live a life
a mere human lives - to have a wife,
to find a paying job, to meet with friends,
to be a fan of “Liverpool”* that tends
to take last place this season, to get old,
to pay off mortgages, to die from cold
but not insomnia… 
                           As someone said,
nothing is fuller than an empty head.

*England's football club

11/14/2019	
Favourite Poem From November 2019 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Julia Ward
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 12/1/2019 7:15:00 PM
Wow! Missed this one my friend! Your fine creativity so astounds. As your poetry marks such clever bounds. As a poet, blessings to you were sent. In this world, you write -your time so well spent!* A gem and a fav my friend.. God bless..
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Date: 11/17/2019 1:48:00 PM
How nice of you to title a poem after one of my body parts! ~ Air in There
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 11/17/2019 4:26:00 PM
Air is good. Ventilate the attic from time to time)
Date: 11/16/2019 11:59:00 PM
You are a master of creativity Kurt. I enjoyed reading your sonnet very much! : ) xxoo
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Date: 11/17/2019 5:09:00 AM
Thank you, Connie. I enjoyed reading your comments too)
Date: 11/14/2019 10:26:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem, Kurt.
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 11/15/2019 2:23:00 AM
Thanks, Line)
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