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An Edenic Rise

Bluebells are a symbol of humility, gratitude and constancy A perfect day is not lackluster, nor lusting for more, but rather knowing the plenitude in each sentient moment. —Quote by Poet An Edenic Rise it’s perfect degrees of sixty-one stimulates a chirrup ‘cross screen in pjs; my feet are bare pedicured cerulian better than Summer and Winter’s too cold to bear love perfect degrees in slight chill of fahrenheit add cup of Highlander Grogg an Edenic rise joyful sighs sans monotone with cream in the cup retiree with work to do bluebells boon in afternoon

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Date: 6/20/2024 10:59:00 AM
Kim, sounds very relaxing. There's nothing quite like perfect temperature to enjoy the surroundings. I hope you have many more days with sensations such as these. BTW, I hope I do too!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2024 7:14:00 PM
Thank you! Yes, have a perfect Edenic day!
Date: 6/11/2024 2:52:00 PM
Wise expressions, dear soul- I loved your quote, made me think, the whole poem made me think xx :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/11/2024 5:06:00 PM
Thank you for sharing that with me. So glad you found the poem and quote thought-provoking!
Date: 6/11/2024 11:37:00 AM
A lovely collection of tankas dear Ki.. nice imagery, especially in the second one..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/11/2024 12:43:00 PM
Thank you, Silent! :)

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