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Am I Alone???

I am alone Or am i?? I have never held someone like ive held u.. Just the simple brush of ur skin, drove me 2 sin.. And just a simple graze of ur lips, made me feel a greatfull blizz. So i ask if i am "alone"??? But wat iz "alone:??? Iz it a feeling or iz it reality??? Around u,, even before we kizzed.. I realized i kno no such feeling of alone... 4 around u, i wish u were the ruler of my throne... Just as wen i gaze into ur eyez,i feel SOOO alive... So i kneal before u willingly giveing u my pride... Would u be the mostr importent thing in my life??????

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Date: 7/9/2016 2:00:00 AM
CRAZY, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/23/2010 4:04:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets...please continue to share your creative writes with us all..as this delight tonight...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/23/2010 3:22:00 PM
i like the way you use the lower-case i and spell kiss kizzed. Welcome to poetry soup. -Susan Mills
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Date: 3/23/2010 12:41:00 PM
I love the passion that is in this write Crazy - Thanks for sharing - An enjoyable read -:)
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Date: 3/23/2010 7:23:00 AM
Wow that is really good. Sylvia calm down geez give him a break!!! Good job!!! Keep writing!!! Can't wait to read more!!! -Courtney-
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Date: 3/23/2010 6:20:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Crazy. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2010 11:20:00 PM
Young love :-) such a confusing time! Lovely poem.
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Date: 3/22/2010 8:58:00 PM
well expressed.... good write... enjoyed
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