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Alone On The Moon

Sometimes I feel like I’m alone on the moon I can still see the world but I can’t touch it and it’s difficult to breathe Beauty abides, yet peerless to memory a newfound sort of loneliness and then there is the piercing sound of nothing It’s white hot bright yet freezing cold I’m tired but I can sleep and time has disappeared I don’t feel as though I’ll die yet life is so different, it’s a kind of death and I wonder, everything

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Date: 6/19/2024 8:46:00 AM
Hello Mike, A poem that makes me think of days that I have felt this way. I loved how you captured our emotions and feel for the person who is experiencing this. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/20/2024 4:50:00 AM
Daniel, thanks you so much and I am glad that I do not feel that way too often!
Date: 6/18/2024 10:54:00 AM
Hello Mike Gentile, Wow! ! Some imagination you have. Happy Tuesday. xxxx-oooo. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/19/2024 10:17:00 AM
Hello Mike, You are welcome. Happy Wednesday. xxxx-oooo /Darlene/
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/18/2024 4:29:00 PM
Thank you Darlene xxoo
Date: 6/18/2024 9:17:00 AM
What you need is a moon chick. Now I know what you're thinking: But Woody, they've found no evidence of even microscopic life on the moon much less an alien moon gal. I'm guessing all the good stuff is on the dark side. Feeling adventurous?
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/18/2024 9:43:00 AM
Always Tom, what is life without an adventure!! Thank you!!
Date: 6/18/2024 5:06:00 AM
Youv expressed so well here dear mike, sometimes i feel the same, tired but cant sleep, and everything feels so distant and unreachable. So moving and heartfelt this is! Well delivered in the most eloquent manner! Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/18/2024 9:42:00 AM
Thank you so much Ink Empress!

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