Allergies

leaf’s’dust in the breeze…. my loud unrelenting sneeze brings me to my knees

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/20/2010 10:45:00 AM

Good afternoon Robb. The weekend and half this week are gone and this is the first I have had a chance to read. Had so much drama in my life. Really feeling good reading poetry today. Glad yours was among them. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/19/2010 1:30:00 PM

OH I feel for u Robb if u have allergies to foliage.. one of my sons does too and the sneezes are unique luv... a grand piece to describe the feelings of those symptoms and your rhyme is perfect luv..

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/19/2010 12:40:00 PM

hahaha, tis the season, cute one