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All of a Sudden . . .

The sound of thunder grows louder each second the tremor, the vibration inanimate yet like a weapon Softly the rain pelts down on me Setting the swollen clouds free . . .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/6/2009 11:22:00 AM
Vivid as visual in sight, your good with words in expression, Sincerely Moses
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Date: 6/14/2009 6:50:00 AM
Love the before the storm atmosphere, and storms in general. You captured the imagery so well. Especially love your very last line. Love, Shar
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Date: 6/14/2009 5:34:00 AM
love the sound, energy and movement of this fine poem! Fathima, Jim
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