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All-Encompassing Love

Much like the force of gravity Love surrounds you attracting everything to its core, The more you pull towards you like a bowstring further it shoots the arrow. ~08/07/18 ~"What is Love" contest by Faraz Ajmal

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Susan Gentry

Date: 8/11/2018 2:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Great metaphor. Well done!

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/9/2018 8:52:00 PM

Sincere congratulations on your win in Faraz's contest, Abdul - blessings and best wishes ... keep up the great work, my friend! :-)

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/9/2018 7:01:00 PM

I really like how you explained love as a 'force of gravity', Abdul. Congratulations on your nice placement in the contest. Sandra

L. J. Carber

Date: 8/9/2018 9:15:00 AM

Great metaphor, Abdul-- I have lately thought of forces-- good and bad ones-- working on us much like gravity does, unseen but omnipresent. Congrats!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/8/2018 3:16:00 PM

Love attracts love! Beautifully expressed in these few lines Abdul. Congratulations on your win! : )

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 8/8/2018 1:12:00 PM

It is a really lovely free verse and certainly a joy tovread, many congratulations on your wonderful position in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day

Robertina B.

Date: 8/7/2018 7:41:00 PM

A lovely free verse, Abdul.. Enjoyed reading! Bravo!