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Alerts of Autumn

procuring produce groundwork to confront jack frost ~ bald trees witness all PLACED : 1st Autumn in Nature - Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Syllable count: PS Date: 09-09-2022

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Susan Ashley
Date: 9/22/2022 8:14:00 PM
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Dear Patri, beautiful imagery, especially your last line for a great finale. A splendid haiku! Congratulations for your wonderful placement in Tania's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/22/2022 11:48:00 PM
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Thank you so much for the best compliments!
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/20/2022 6:31:00 PM
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Great image, Patri. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Blessings my friend
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/22/2022 11:47:00 PM
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Thanks a lot for the best compliments!
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Md Johnson
Date: 9/18/2022 8:09:00 AM
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Congratulations! — MDJ
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/22/2022 11:46:00 PM
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Thank you so much!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/18/2022 7:56:00 AM
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Congratulations for your win. Great poem :)
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/22/2022 11:46:00 PM
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Thank you so much for the best compliments!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/18/2022 7:09:00 AM
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Very nice Patri! Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/22/2022 11:46:00 PM
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Thanks a lot for the compliments.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/18/2022 3:45:00 AM
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Patri, congratulations on your first place win, love the last line!
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/22/2022 11:45:00 PM
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Thank you so much for the best compliments!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/17/2022 7:38:00 PM
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"bald trees" - Great image. Congratulations!
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/22/2022 11:45:00 PM
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John Fleming
Date: 9/9/2022 7:28:00 AM
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Makes a quiet but subtle little impression on ones mind. Nicely penned! :) john
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/11/2022 3:13:00 AM
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Thank you so much for reading my lines!

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