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Aimlessly Adrift

Disconnected from the people and the things that I hold dear On a course through time and space I wonder what I'm doing here Black miasma overwhelms me paralyzing life and mind I feel like I'm the piece that's missing from a puzzle I can't find Cold stagnation ever seeping ever creeping in my soul All my yearnings and my longings keep me in this deep dark hole With the knowledge that I'm drowning in a pool of my own fear Aimlessly adrift, I wonder what the hell I'm doing here

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 1/27/2019 1:10:00 AM

Very great poem, written by a talented poet! -JWE

Michael Wise
Date: 1/27/2019 8:46:00 AM

Thank u very much JW! :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/26/2019 11:57:00 AM

I found this to be sad and hope that you are not in a dark hole and there will be light seen and felt soon. Well written Michael :)

Michael Wise
Date: 1/26/2019 1:07:00 PM

I have been going through some challenging things lately, planning major changes in my life this year. But it's not as bad as all that. Thank u Heidi for your kind thoughts. :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/26/2019 1:35:00 AM

This one made me smile, as you have expressed some of my most powerful feelings in such a way, that I can feel them.

Michael Wise
Date: 1/26/2019 7:18:00 AM

I am glad you found a connection to it Caren, thank u! :)