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Ahh Choo Haiku

Dark skies prevailing Rain puddles icing over Jack Frost clamping down Sweaters change to coats Canopies falling like snow Crystals flake windshields Arctic winds howling Blizzard skating upon us Prepare to shovel Mustaches frozen Watery eyes show the chill Sore noses galore August 25, 2016

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Daniel Turner

Date: 8/25/2016 8:56:00 PM

This is super, Randy. You have definitely captured the change of seasons. Really enjoyed the read. Good luck!

Randy Steele
Date: 8/30/2016 7:49:00 AM

Thanks Daniel. Your comment is a great encouragement.

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/25/2016 7:45:00 PM

You captured the change of season wonderfully with great word choice and vivid imagery. The last verse really made me smile..so cute :-) A terrific piece, a pleasure to read. My best to you in the contest. blessings, lynn

Randy Steele
Date: 8/30/2016 7:52:00 AM

Thank you, Lynn Marie. I've experienced that last verse many winters in Ohio. Will visit your poems soon. Blessings to you, also.