Agoraphobic

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Bitesize No.98 Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Line Gauthier. Date written: 01/19/2025

Paralyzing fear cages him in; Perennially trained outdoors - his jealous eyes Roaming about free - strange faces Oh, how he wishes he could be... One of those faces!

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Deb M

Date: 1/19/2025 10:59:00 AM

Hi Edward….what a well written powerful write….a terrible debilitating restrictive fear/phobia ….love the first line especially! Debx

Tom Woody

Date: 1/19/2025 9:36:00 AM

Reminds me of Adrian Monk's brother in the TV show. Phobias area odd thing for sure. Nice write

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/19/2025 9:43:00 AM

Thank you, Tom:- ) Oh, I love that show! So many have phobias, the most common being Acrophobia. I do have it, to be frank, lol.