Notes About The Poem

Age of Aquarius

Time was when in a golden age begun
  a boy was I and a vision was she,
and at the heart of her constellation 
  gazed I upon its infinite beauty.
I vowed the ends of the earth to follow
  your heavenly star wherever it led,
and to sit beside your desk in your glow
  but sat my old nemesis in my stead.
Bows in your hair and stardust in your eyes
  rushed my pulse to farthest extremity,
but when the end Age of Innocence dies
  all is lost but the nothingness in me.
Now I feel my pulse and racing heart slowed
since I followed you home down Valley Road.


          Written: November 1992

                    For Beverly

*Mt. Eden Normal Primary School, Auckland NZ.
  The year was 1971. We were just 10 years old.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/9/2024 4:34:00 PM
Keith, pretty astounding for a young poet. Talent you do have. Smiles!
Login to Reply
Trestrail Avatar
Keith D Trestrail
Date: 10/10/2024 5:06:00 AM
Cheers Duke.
Date: 7/27/2024 11:58:00 AM
I feel the depth of this poem. How our passions change through the years. It sounds Ike a good bye to puppy love.
Login to Reply
Trestrail Avatar
Keith D Trestrail
Date: 7/27/2024 9:51:00 PM
Yep, to me she was an angel. Cheers Hilda.
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter