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Time was when in a golden age begun a boy was I and a vision was she, and at the heart of her constellation gazed I upon its infinite beauty. I vowed the ends of the earth to follow your heavenly star wherever it led, and to sit beside your desk in your glow but sat my old nemesis in my stead. Bows in your hair and stardust in your eyes rushed my pulse to farthest extremity, but when the end Age of Innocence dies all is lost but the nothingness in me. Now I feel my pulse and racing heart slowed since I followed you home down Valley Road. Written: November 1992 For Beverly *Mt. Eden Normal Primary School, Auckland NZ. The year was 1971. We were just 10 years old.

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Date: 10/9/2024 4:34:00 PM
Keith, pretty astounding for a young poet. Talent you do have. Smiles!
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 10/10/2024 5:06:00 AM
Cheers Duke.
Date: 7/27/2024 11:58:00 AM
I feel the depth of this poem. How our passions change through the years. It sounds Ike a good bye to puppy love.
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 7/27/2024 9:51:00 PM
Yep, to me she was an angel. Cheers Hilda.

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