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Adrift

The boat floats adrift Slack sails shift from side to side Oar broke, rudder lost To wander the ocean wide Free at incredible cost

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/26/2017 9:50:00 AM
I understand that freedom, it's a frightening one...
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Date: 4/25/2017 2:25:00 AM
Deep in the ocean's blue, in your boat, I'll follow you! Great tanka, John! Loved it!
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