Get Your Premium Membership

Adieu My Mortal Coil

Velvet winter’s bitter kiss Escorts my soul to unholy Bliss As teeth impale, my neck compelled To embrace his unsacred gift I am filled with blasphemed pain As I am born anew In damned unrest I will remain A` vie je de adieu *Hello everybody I just wanted to introduce myself, I'm Ricky, Chan's (aka JustThatArchaicPoet) husband. He's been encouraging me to join this community and share my art so I finally decided to share my work here. I've never shared my work so I'm interested and nervous about sharing it but I'm looking forward to the experience of putting myself out there for the first time. Thank You.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/27/2014 9:41:00 PM
Ricky Another deep and powerful write. Your soul comes out in each one of your poems. No need to be nervous sharing your work. We are all friendly here and one big happy poet family. Nicely done Hugs Sweet Pea
Login to Reply
Date: 1/27/2014 9:08:00 PM
I love you baby and I am proud of you <3
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry