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Some days I'm just vacuous No coherent thoughts together And I use the vague excuse That it's due to the weather But actually my head's full Of fantastic visions and dreams And I can only feel the world Through the cracks in the seams

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Date: 2/25/2024 4:51:00 AM
I think cracks are beautiful too.. our heads are a very busy place indeed. I enjoyed this gem this afternoon
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Date: 2/25/2024 4:49:00 PM
Thank you Wilma, Leonard Cohen's words about "cracks" are one of my favourite...."that's how the light gets in"
Date: 1/20/2024 6:11:00 AM
Let's hope at least one of those fantastic dreams comes true for you, daydreamer
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Date: 2/25/2024 4:51:00 PM
So many of my dreams have come true Tom, but a dreamer never stops dreaming! ;]

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