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Abjectly Blind Even With the Perfect Sight

Hurrying and rushing even at eight, usually just to avoid been late. been doing this for a while and I am so accurate, the day I relent, my Boss Anger I activate, the beauty of Nature and sight seeing, no room to accommodate, so focused on my Job and nothing to motivate, through the Trolley Bus I get to the Office straight, none present yet, not even a mate. I'll sit alone for some minutes as I wait, and this I terribly hate, I do not even know for how long I can tolerate. Then one day, I deviated from my usual line. In the Bus, taking my time and making it mine, not giving a damn even if I reached at nine, watching the passers-by smile so fine, up the sky the Birds happily dine, moving in groups like flying swine. Just observing the 3 in 1 street lights was a sign that my Job intoxicated me like wine and all this while with a perfect sight, I've been blind. The Unique Victoria Bar, I've never seen. The "Dark-Ages" band, performing so obscene, showing their 'half-naked' dancing body is what I mean, and the Statue close to the Adidas Shop looks so lean. Aha! The writing on the building is just a signature and the photo on it gave a nice gesture, initially, it puzzled me like a difficult literature, but now the advert seems to be a blend of perfect mixture, as it reads "Gym with us and better your posture" Just understanding the popular Joke about the Pear, It is two round Toys I noticed and a bottom they share. Looking like one big Apple green and clear. Also enjoying the glaring Banks with the colors they wear, not observing all these is worse than to err, and making me feel Nature was never near, this is a burden I am about to bear. How on Earth can I explain this? It's so hurtful not experiencing such a bliss, crying intensely like my niece, is not enough justification for a 5 year-miss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/25/2016 9:04:00 PM
ONCE AGAIN, FUNOM, THANK YOU for blessing my comment with a reply. THAT WAS NICE OF YOU!!! PD**
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 8:12:00 AM
I am the one who is honoured Linda... I have been hoping your reply my last message in your soup mail. I hope you do.. Blessings and hugs dear Linda
Date: 1/13/2016 11:13:00 PM
FUNOM, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2016 12:54:00 PM
Thank you so much Linda
Date: 1/9/2016 1:19:00 AM
Congratulations!!! Well-deserved win!! :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2016 12:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Selfa
Date: 1/8/2016 7:42:00 PM
Hi Funom, CONGRATS on your Awesome win.... SKAT
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2016 12:52:00 PM
heeey SKAT... I can see you are really overwhelmed by this. Thank you for your ever encouraging words
Date: 1/8/2016 5:02:00 AM
Incredible! Congrats on your win. From Jean
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2016 12:51:00 PM
Thank you so much Jean McLoughlin
Date: 5/30/2015 12:57:00 AM
I love how this flows and bounces. Congrats to you with this fine win.
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2016 12:51:00 PM
Thank you so much rob
Date: 5/29/2015 1:14:00 PM
Wow, wow, wow...and congrats on your win Funom...such powerful rhyme and potent message, about appreciating our time and observing the beauty around us...thank u for sharing...7habang
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2016 12:50:00 PM
Thank you so much Thabang... I really appreciate it
Date: 5/29/2015 11:57:00 AM
Funom, Congratulations on your win and a 7. It's so hard to get enjoyment out of life when you’re involved in your work. It’s wise to let your wings grow and soar to a future of love and happiness instead of a workaholic existence. XD Love and Hugs Eve
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2016 12:49:00 PM
You've said it all Eve... Thank you a million times
Date: 5/29/2015 9:54:00 AM
Congrats on your win
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2016 12:49:00 PM
Thank you so much Joseph
Date: 5/29/2015 4:17:00 AM
Congratulations to your well, deserved WIN Funom! This sure is a fantastic read! ;-)
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2016 12:49:00 PM
Thank you so much Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/29/2015 12:43:00 AM
Congratulations, my friend on this top-of-the-class awesome win! Well-deserved with this brilliant piece! Pandita
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2016 12:48:00 PM
Thank you my dearest friend. As always, you've been a huge encouragement to me
Date: 5/28/2015 5:56:00 PM
Congrats on the top spot
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2016 12:48:00 PM
Thank you so much Lawless.. Its been a while. Happy new year friend
Date: 5/28/2015 2:56:00 PM
Funom, Congratulations, that is all :-) **SKAT WAS HERE**
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Date: 1/25/2016 12:47:00 PM
hahahaha... Thank you interesting SKAT!
Date: 5/28/2015 2:55:00 PM
this was awesome. WOW, I can't belive the poem is yours Funom :-) SKAT
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2016 12:47:00 PM
Yes.. Its mine.. Its one of my first poems published here. Thanks for the comment SKAT
Date: 3/23/2013 4:50:00 PM
Great poem and message. Thank you for sharing it :-)
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/23/2013 5:21:00 PM
thanks for ur comment. U are highly welcome
Date: 11/21/2011 8:15:00 AM
Thanks a lot my dear Poets
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Date: 11/17/2011 6:13:00 PM
AN everyday spin on taking time to smell the roses. I like how the rhyme makes your poem flow and the message in it. :)
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Date: 11/16/2011 2:45:00 PM
Clever and witty write, Funom
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