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Abdication

on night's soft pillow

sky's king is falling asleep- 

abdication's dream!* 






© Demetrios Trifiatis
       16 June 2020

* Seeing everything that happens these days around the world and being disappointed, the sun might like to give up his throne so he doesn't have to witness tomorrow!

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Caren Krutsinger Date: 6/28/2020 6:16:00 AM It is indeed a bleak time; which means we have to be more sun-like ourselves and accentuate the positives. Login to Reply

Kudzai Mhangwa Date: 6/16/2020 2:02:00 PM If I where the sun I wouldn't mind abdicating myself! This poem is so powerful and it is going to haunt me for a while. Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 6/16/2020 8:03:00 PM Thank you my friend, Kudzai for your excellent comment. My intention was not...to hount you or anyone else but to underline the dark times we live in. Blessings.

Michael Tor Date: 6/16/2020 1:18:00 PM Demetrios you have captured a moment of beauty and have given it a reason based on the sad reality of mankind. An exceptional piece my friend. Blessings your way... Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 6/16/2020 1:54:00 PM Thank you , Michael, my good friend for your comprehension. God bless you and keep you healthy and happy

Vijay Pandit Date: 6/16/2020 7:39:00 AM But tomorrow the sun will return--I get your point my friend. well said, Demetrios. Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 6/16/2020 7:56:00 AM Yes, fortunately, the sun will return tomorrow but the time will come in the very distant future that the sun will not return my friend! Thank you!

Tom Cunningham Date: 6/16/2020 5:12:00 AM Certainly enjoying a well earned rest after providing the earth with warmth and light. Love your photo Demetrios. Tom Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 6/16/2020 6:27:00 AM The photo I took yesterday in Saronida, Greece! Love sunsets. Thank you for your visit dear, Tom! Blessings

Jenish Somadas Date: 6/16/2020 5:01:00 AM wow.. lol.. It made me smile.. night's soft pillow.. Great Haiku Demetrios... Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 6/16/2020 6:24:00 AM Sun was your and my inspiration today dearest, Jenish. Our Muses were ...collaborating! hahaha. Hugs xxx and blessings!