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A Whale of a Lament

Ten-thousand deep-sea divers standing on me ~ Twenty-thousand legs under the sea ______________________________________ Revision of a 'Speed Joke' heard within the last month on WGN Radio, 720-AM, Chicago, IL

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 8/16/2021 3:25:00 PM
Loved the metphor here, had me laughing . . . ; )
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Date: 8/16/2021 12:04:00 PM
I can see it and I smile.
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Date: 8/12/2021 10:01:00 AM
(chuckle) I hope you took a good breath before you found yourself down there with all that weight on you!
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Date: 8/12/2021 6:58:00 AM
Awesome Gershon! To picture this makes me laugh!! Happy Thursday!
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