A visit at the park

visiting the park the Robin hopped near the bench where Sparrow gathered Heidi Sands 6/15/24 (C)opyright

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/17/2024 4:37:00 PM

Human nature they love to gather dear Heidi :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/18/2024 6:54:00 AM

Yes, true . Thank you :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/16/2024 8:15:00 PM

enjoyed the twist, Robin and sparrow...hello Heidi, am glad to see you here after my lllonv break from soup...all the best ??

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/17/2024 2:22:00 AM

Hi Nette! It is great to see you! Thank you for taking the time to visit my poetry. I have been busy and not here as much as usual. But, things will even out and I will be back :)

Nette Onclaud
Date: 6/16/2024 8:16:00 PM

lllong