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A TINY STORY WITH BIG AFFECTS

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This poem is a metaphor.
A person aborted her child at about four months along, closer to five months. She said the child was male, she said she just didn't want to be tied down. This same person never conceived again. Throughout her life she made ways to undermine her sisters to their own children. This wicked undermining caused problems for the childrens relationships with their own mothers. This person has also done similar things to others. Someday God will have her before him and he will judge her horrible motives. Her child will see her again and rebuke her in all of Gods glory. Hmm...maybe that's what she wants her sisters to feel...rebuking. Amen.

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