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A Stormy Play

fringed rifts tear aside a curtain ragged with light stage is prepared soft murmurs grow into roars voice raises to a deafening scream that erupts and whips waters with thundering applause

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/28/2018 4:48:00 PM

You bring it on...with excellence, sweet friend!

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 10/2/2018 2:06:00 AM

I love this. Are you on a stage theme at the moment? Your writing is beautiful as always. Take care of the actor. Kai

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 9/15/2018 10:57:00 PM

Ooh that's SO good Sweet P! I will have to share that one with Brad tomorrow. Lovely to read you my friend <3

Lisa Ricci

Date: 9/14/2018 1:23:00 PM

PS - I just had to add - I grew up always going go live performances - plays - musicals - dances - etc - I have such appreciation for the arts of all kinds - you have described the anticipation and build up and yes feeling perfectly - well done - thank you for bringing the theater to me today - bye penguin

Lisa Ricci

Date: 9/14/2018 1:14:00 PM

Hello Darren. I love the excitement of live music plays theaters etc. You have described it perfectly with the anticipation and build up. Fabulous penguin. May this day find you and all live action well.

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/14/2018 8:12:00 AM

Great imagery Darren against the backdrop of a play! I really enjoyed reading it!!

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/14/2018 7:48:00 AM

The storm must go on...nice write my friend...hope all is good Daren...stay safe...love & light...^WW^

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/13/2018 5:38:00 PM

Hello Darren,this sounds to me like quit a storm outside. I have enjoyed your poetry. Have a nice evening my friend.

Chris Green

Date: 9/13/2018 3:10:00 PM

Wow, this sounds like the hurricane that is hitting the east coast of the U.S. right now. Very descriptive my good friend. A beautifully powerful poem. It must be raining where you are. : )

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/13/2018 3:00:00 PM

A lovely write. Charming, Darren.