A Space of Quiet

a space of quiet the gods called a truce warriors thunder clash ceased birds are heard once more

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Pipping Stars

Date: 9/1/2017 6:33:00 AM

yeah ok ... not real big on the whole " gods" word ... kinda changes the mood .... uhm yeah ... cant say much more than that ... suprising what can be picked up from a person by just a handful of haikus ... uhm ... we enjoyed your others ... we are the type of writer that swings on words ... uhm ... yeah ... i read some more ... i write what i call impact writes ... this write of yours impacted us for your soul ... we love you ... but ... not as much as the cross ...

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/1/2017 9:41:00 AM

Gods to me are just a primitive way of explaining all the attributes of one god. They are immense and perhaps too difficult to encompass in a primitive mind. All is one and one is all. Just my own explanation of the phenomena. Thanks for your honesty.