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A Shining Star

"a shining star" a shining star you shall always be a jewel in the cosmos that I see like the snow that glistens white like the moon that shines bright you bring out the best in me when you stand before the ocean blue feel a gentle embrace intended just for you when you see a pearl or shell in the sand know it is me taking you by the hand know your heart and soul will renew a grand piano or a single guitar a source of strength from afar with words that I have none to give with hope and love may light live a shining star is what you are SkyWatcher - 04-09-17

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/3/2017 3:13:00 PM

Very nice, 7 for sure :)

Lisa Ricci
Date: 6/4/2017 4:47:00 AM

Good Morning Debbie. Thank you very much. I appreciate your generosity. I hope you enjoyed the entry. Have a good morning.

Edward Snyder

Date: 5/2/2017 2:27:00 PM

a shining rhyme, nice write Lisa

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/3/2017 3:54:00 AM

Good Morning Edward. Thank you very much for your generosity and for mentioning the rhyme. I truly appreciate that. Have a wonderful morning and day and enjoy poetry.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 4/29/2017 10:22:00 AM

Beautiful.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/30/2017 2:46:00 AM

Hello Scott. Good Morning. Thank you very much. I hope you enjoyed the entry. I appreciate your generosity. Have a good morning.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/24/2017 6:32:00 PM

I love this gem. So well written. You touched my heart. This poem speaks to who you are. From my reading you're a beautiful soul. I will fav this poem. Thank you for a wonderful read.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/25/2017 6:46:00 AM

Good Morning Maurice. Thank you ever so much. It is I who am touched by your review and words. Honestly. I'm pleased you enjoyed the entry. Thank you for gracing and enhancing it with such generosity. Have a wonderful day.

Just Jane

Date: 4/24/2017 5:05:00 AM

What a great read! Thank you for the beautiful work of art.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/24/2017 5:38:00 AM

Hello Jane. Good Morning. It is I who thank you. Your commentary is such a gift and generous. Honestly. Words can not express. Have a wonderful morning and day.

Maria Williams

Date: 4/23/2017 8:34:00 AM

Oh My Goodness Lisa, since I'm still new navigating around this website, I totally missed seeing the POTW you received last week on this gem of a poem - just like the pearl you see on the shore. Congrats for a brilliant poem and win.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/24/2017 5:34:00 AM

Morning Maria. Shake hands. I'm still learning also. It took me the longest time to send a message (lol) but true. Then somehow I learned of the POTD and then I learned of various contest and most recently the POTW. I know there is more out there (another lol) but I'll find it someday. Thank you for seeing this entry again and for leaving me your words. I truly appreciate the time and the generosity. Have a wonderful morning and I will see you on your page. PS. thank you for incorporating the beach within your words. What a gift.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/22/2017 7:23:00 AM

Congratulations of POTW, Lisa. I had not seen this one yet - lovely!

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/22/2017 10:18:00 AM

Hello Agnes. Good Morning. Thank you very much. I was so thrilled and still am. I'm honored as I am by your review. Thank you again and have a wonderful day and weekend.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/21/2017 2:01:00 PM

Hello Lisa,nice to meet you. I always make wishes on the shiny star, hoping my wish will come true. A7

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/21/2017 2:44:00 PM

Good Afternoon Darlene. Its very nice to meet you also. Thank you for your wonderful review and commentary. Never do I take either lightly. You have graced this entry with elegance. Enjoy the rest of the afternoon.

Just Jane

Date: 4/20/2017 3:38:00 AM

What a great write! Thank you for sharing!

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/20/2017 8:06:00 AM

Hello Just Jane. It is I who thank you. Honestly. Your review is most generous. Never do I take reviews or commentary lightly. Have a wonderful day and I look forward to turning to your page.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/20/2017 1:22:00 AM

This is very lovely Lisa. Congratulations on having this poem honored with POTW! 7 ; )

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/20/2017 8:04:00 AM

Good Morning Connie. Thank you so much for such a fine and generous review. Thank you also for the congratulations. I was so thrilled and honored not to mention surprised. Have a wonderful morning and keep enjoying poetry.

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/18/2017 10:55:00 PM

Wonderful work Lisa and congratulations for POTW honors...

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/19/2017 6:58:00 AM

Top of the day to you Charlie. Hi. Thank you Thank you. I am so honored by your review and by the entry being chosen. I'm thrilled. Have a wonderful day and I will see you on your page. Thank you once again Charlie.

Carole Duet

Date: 4/18/2017 9:39:00 PM

A lovely poem, SkyWatcher, and congrats on POTD.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/19/2017 6:56:00 AM

Hello Carole. Thank you very much. Thank you for seeing this entry for it has special meaning to me. Your review is most generous. Enjoy the day and poetry as well.

John Hamilton

Date: 4/17/2017 1:22:00 PM

A beautiful rhyming poem Lisa, congrats on POTW also. I love poems about the stars. This would be a good one for my latest contest, give it a go!

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/18/2017 3:15:00 AM

Good Morning John. Thank you very much. I was thrilled and so surprised. And yes, I'm so honored by your review and commentary. Thank you for the mention of your contest and thank you for thinking it worthy to enter. Honestly. I'm pleased at that. Have a wonderful morning John and thank you once again.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/17/2017 10:20:00 AM

WoW! Lisa, This just beautiful, uplifting and encouraging. Congratulations on getting the poem of the week. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/18/2017 3:12:00 AM

Good Morning Alexis. It is my turn now to say Wow. Thank you very much. Believe it or not I'm still learning my way around and learning different features each day. I had no idea there was a POTW. I am thrilled and surprised. Thank you for your generosity. Enjoy the morning and day. The person who this is meant for is a shining star in my eyes.

Lynn Marie

Date: 4/16/2017 5:05:00 PM

Congratulations on POTW Lisa:) this is a beauty, I am so happy for you of this honour:) lynnxxx

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/17/2017 9:14:00 AM

Morning Lynn. Thank you so much. I was so surprised and honored. Never do I take your generosity lightly. Have a wonderful day and I will see you on your page.

James Horn

Date: 4/16/2017 3:44:00 PM

Now there is a poem. Jim Horn

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/17/2017 9:13:00 AM

My goodness. Hello James. Thank you ever so much. Honestly. Never do I take reviews or commentary lightly. Have a wonderful day and I will see you on your page.

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/16/2017 7:32:00 AM

Dear Lisa, It is outstanding. Enjoyed the read.Congratulation for your well deserved POTW. A7 from me............//hugs

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/17/2017 9:11:00 AM

Hello Manmath. Words can not express my appreciation for such a generous review and commentary. Thank you so much. Honestly. Have a wonderful day and I will see you on your page.

Darren White

Date: 4/14/2017 3:06:00 AM

Your poem is No.14 in the best new poems list. That makes me smile :) Well-deserved.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/14/2017 8:17:00 AM

Hiya Darren. Believe it or not I'm still learning my way around but learning something new each day. Thank you for telling me. Wow. And yes, seeing your name and the beautiful avatar makes me smile. Honestly. Have a wonderful afternoon. Smiles back to you always.

Maria Williams

Date: 4/11/2017 8:27:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your experience with us in this lovely poem Lisa. I can identify with the picture you paint. This has to be a 7+

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/11/2017 10:39:00 AM

Good Morning Maria. It is I who thanks you. Not only does your beautiful picture with you smiling but your words as well that makes me smile. I thank you for seeing this entry for it does have meaning to me. Have a wonderful afternoon. I will see you on your page.

Anil Deo

Date: 4/11/2017 7:20:00 AM

Lisa,, shalom-shalom! PS announced that the site & writers/readers cannot bear to wait 2-3 days for more of your kind words and spontaneous love for humanity. Come see us, soon. Blessings, especially this Passion Week. (My aunt needs prayer)AD

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/11/2017 10:37:00 AM

You are a blessing Anil. A true man of substance. Thank you. Yes, I will continue to say a prayer that God guides her and her soul at this time and process. I thank you for all your continued support and generosity. I hope I am deserving of it Anil. Shalom to you also.

Anil Deo

Date: 4/10/2017 8:40:00 PM

Making sure I am NOT forgetting to select 7, when I have said so. Newbies can slip up ... now I am sure this poem got the highest PS allows. Shalom, shalom! (Pray for my aunt who lives abroad ... in her 80s, and may not last the month!)

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/11/2017 5:45:00 AM

Good Morning Anil. Yes, I will say a prayer for your failing aunt. Consider that done. May God be with her during this process. And yes, oh the features and selections we must learn. I'm still learning my way. Thank you so much Anil for all your support and generosity. Shalom back to you and your family during this time. PS. Never worry about me and with grading. Stars and points don't mean much for me myself. However, I do respect it for others who achieve success and recognition. I like to quietly stay in the background. Honestly.

White Wolf

Date: 4/10/2017 7:10:00 PM

Absolutely stunning, Lisa! I'm a real sucker when it comes to a great rhyme, and that's exactly what this is. The subject, the execution, beautifully done!

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/11/2017 5:42:00 AM

Good Morning White Wolf. So nice to see you. Thank you for your beautiful and generous review. I am so honored and speechless of your intake and commentary of the rhyme. Words can not express my appreciation for that. I enjoy rhyme in entries of others but not mine somehow. I can't explain it but I'm trying to get better and practice. Have a wonderful day and thank you once again.

Lynn Marie

Date: 4/10/2017 4:35:00 PM

Oh how beautiful Lisa:) The ocean is my sanctuary and the galaxy above, incredibly stunning. Your lovely words capture the essence of it's magic and love in your heart. There is great serenity in your words that wraps around one in a comforting embrace. A wonderful piece that is absolutely enchanting.:) a fave, 7+ lynnxxx i am very happy to know a fellow 'long commenter' Lisa..lolxx

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/11/2017 5:38:00 AM

Top of The Morning to you Lynn Marie. Thank you for the smile and chuckle your commentary brings. Yes, I comment but I comment on what I see. I thank you for such graciousness and generosity. I so appreciate your time that you took with this entry. Never do I take reviews time or generosity lightly. Have a wonderful morning and I will see you on your page.

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/10/2017 10:24:00 AM

Your emotions and poetic energy wrap themselves around your words with style and grace. This poem flows with love and the reader is pulled along by a poetic current of beautiful thoughts. Emile.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/11/2017 5:35:00 AM

Good Morning Emile. My goodness. Thank you so much for this marvelous and generous review. It is beautiful and I do not take such generosity lightly. Have a wonderful morning.

Chris Green

Date: 4/10/2017 7:27:00 AM

A beautiful and touching poem my friend. This one shines like the stars at night. It had me singing Earth, Wind and Fire's "Shining Star". "You're a shining star, no matter who you are. Shining bright to see, what you can truly be" I loved your poem Lisa.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/10/2017 9:32:00 AM

Good Morning Chris. Thank you ever so much. I love the music of Earth Wind and Fire and yes that song as well. Who could not. As always, I appreciate and do not take lightly such generosity. Enjoy the day.