A Risque Dream

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Written - 29th April 2024

I had a dream, it was risqué Read on if you dare I was at a masquerade ball And all there were bare. Except for wearing masks of course No one cared at all Just got on with naked dancing Bouncing round the hall. The funny part was when they parked Backsides on a pew When they came to stand up again The seats stood up too. There was lots of piercing screaming As seats were parted And some very red rosy cheeks On vision as folk partied. At midnight came the final dance The dream came to its close I switched on the light, got such a fright The floor was strewn with clothes.

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Sotto Poet

Date: 4/29/2024 4:51:00 PM

Beryl, this is a fantastic poem that centers on the contrast between a sexually explicit dream and a humorous, funny tone. Everything centers on your amusing fantasy in which guests wear nothing but masks.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/29/2024 6:13:00 PM

Thank you Sotto, we need some humour now and again, somehow this poem leaked from my pen…. Beryl

Lin Lane

Date: 4/29/2024 1:54:00 PM

Haha, Beryl are you sure it was a dream? Fun write, sweet friend.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/29/2024 2:12:00 PM

I thought it was a dream, till I spied the clothes on the floor. Thank you Lin, pleased you enjoyed the read dear friend… Beryl