A Pull, A Return

The snake coils in the sun,
spectacles sheathing her eyes, 
trunk warming against the earth.
They say she feels nothing,
only the hiss of hunger,
the strike of instinct.
But watch—
how she lingers where the light is softest,
how she curves herself into the shape of what she trusts,
how she returns, again, to nest in the mesquite.

The crow does not speak in ways we understand,
only leaves the glint of something small,
a silver coin at your feet.
He waits on the wire,
head tilted,
as if listening for an answer most cannot hear.

The oak does not hold,
but their roots tangle deep with another’s,
sharing water in the dark—
sharing nerves—
sharing networks.

Even the river does not let the stone go—
not yet.

Perhaps Love is beyond what we define it—
something older, quieter…the
macrocosmic marrow of all things—

a pull, a return, a reaching toward.

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Date: 2/26/2025 6:07:00 PM
Such clear and beautiful language herein Laura. The Snake, Crow , Oak and River share a special attribute, they cannot survive without understanding Beauty...perhaps this applies to Love as well Poetess. "Microcosmic marrow of all things..." Great sensitivity in the Snake verse, beautiful insight and word choice. Very wise and masterful poetry once more from your primal refined mind. Your Nature poems are special. Another FAV!!...J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/28/2025 2:10:00 PM
Thank you, Justin, for seeing what words cannot always say— the silent wisdom in each creature’s breath, the marrow of the world braided in their bones.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/28/2025 2:10:00 PM
Yes, perhaps Beauty and Love, like the Snake the Crow the River and the Oak, cannot exist without that divine instinctive understanding, a dance with what is both primal and refined. Your mind deepens the roots of this work, and for that, I am grateful. <3 Laura
Date: 2/26/2025 7:22:00 AM
Laura, this is interesting imagery! Perhaps Love is beyond what we define it— something older, quieter
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/26/2025 11:16:00 AM
Thank you for your thoughts. I appreciate your visits <3 Laura
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