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A Private Named Moon

There once was a private named Moon. He was taller than most in his platoon. Some said he was a kind hearted goon. His problem was a drill sergeant named Wreds. Because Moon was taller than Wreds by two heads. It’s very difficult to take a scolding seriously When the sergeant’s head meets you mysteriously In your neverlands

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Date: 5/16/2018 2:36:00 PM
Witty piece laden with a wonderful sense of humor! I had to laugh out loud! Hugs. Pandita
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/16/2018 3:22:00 PM
Thank you Pandita for the visit, and I'm glad it entertained.
Date: 5/16/2018 10:29:00 AM
Haha can just picture the scene.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/16/2018 12:32:00 PM
This truly did happen to a close family member, but I cannot tell you who.

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