A Place

There is a place harbored solely by my heart. It is peaceful, unhurried, free of every fear. 'Tis magnitudes more when you are near. There is a calmness and serenity about you that is all-seeing, penetrates my very being and fixes me on what's worth achieving. If I listen with mindful intent, I can hear counsel whispered gentle. It is direct, seasoned, and unsentimental. Humbled, graced I am to host such a heart with a place that pathfinds my course. In humility I praise and thank the source.

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Silpika Kalita

Date: 11/22/2021 3:56:00 AM

Such a beautiful composition, serene and soothing, spontaneous and spotless. Kudos! Hugs Silpika

Paul Schneiter
Date: 2/8/2022 6:44:00 PM

You are unfailingly kind, SILPIKA. Please know how grateful I am for all of your comments. I am grateful, too, that you freely share your marvelous poetry. Hugs, Paul

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/30/2021 8:09:00 PM

Such a wonderful place to be, feeling the closeness of another. "There is a calmness and serenity about you" This thought curls softly around me. Beautiful in every way. May your heart continue to soar in love. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paul Schneiter
Date: 2/8/2022 6:47:00 PM

What an honor it is to somehow be worthy of your praise. I hope you know how wonderful you. . . a beautiful shining star. Hugs/Love, Paul

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 8/12/2021 11:03:00 PM

Hello Paul ... a nice romantic verse from the warming of your heart - thank you Paul - Lindsay

Paul Schneiter
Date: 8/13/2021 1:34:00 PM

It is typically sweet of you to respond, Lindsay. Even when my muse is only semi-operational, you are unfailingly supportive. Please know how much I appreciate that. Hugs, Paul