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A Moment of Closure

A hug they call it, a sweet embrace, I see naught much more than casual waste. Hear this: When two wrap arms those two touch hearts. Loves Warmth is shared! A tethered hearth! Droves Of waterfall on rock below, loaded Avalanches of melting snow! And yet more: a tickled itch, a rope wrapped gift… I loath and pray those numb hearts feel, Further that they know to sift As though what they’ve shared is as real as real. I would begrudge for what I’ve seen, but they don’t know what they’re holding Is worth much more than just a hug.

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Date: 2/17/2023 1:37:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.
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