A Lovely Little Day Dream

I dreamed I was in Heaven, 
And there were streets of gold.
But the mansion I had dreamed about
When Life was young and goals drew nigh,
Was very different from the Heaven
I imagined while on the wings of night.
Life taught me to see a different light.
I sat on a hill overlooking small homes
Built along those streets of gold –

There was not one being in sight,
There were all inside their happy homes.
And I knew what was going on inside.
Families were talking and sharing.
They made plans about helping others.
There were no worries about who did what.
It was a quiet place with the purest dreams.
No one yelled at another or called names.
No one was jealous because …
All of the homes were the same.
Everyone was equal in one another’s’ eyes.
And God’s love was everywhere.

Then, I realized, in my lovely little daydream
That only the soul of a man, his essence, lives.
Our mansion in heaven is what we want it to be.
Some like extravagance and lots of gold.
But as for me, I just want to be peaceful
In a quiet little place I call home
… with extended family all around –
And God’s love.  


1/14/2017

 Inspired by Mystic Rose’s Contest:
 A Lovely Little Day Dream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 1/14/2017 9:56:00 PM
Very nice images of Heaven Dane~good luck in the contest!:)
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/16/2017 7:24:00 PM
Thank you for stopping to leave your sweet comment. Smiles, Dane Ann
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