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A Lone Snowflake

A lone snowflake floated my way, so poised Lacking friends airborne to act as decoys I stuck out my tongue, she landed, she melted ~ Had she company, a shovel's smack I'd have dealt it

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 2/7/2022 9:37:00 AM

The beauty of a snowflake. This is so pretty, it twinkled and floated as I read it and made me think of Snowflake Bently, one of my favorite children's books about snowflakes. What a lovely poem. I love the snowflake metaphor or the symbol at the Winter Olympics: We are all different, beautifully different, but we come together as one.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/4/2022 12:02:00 PM

A fun/cute write. Snowflakes are so pretty. Watch out for yellow snow. Have a great/blessed day................

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/5/2022 7:36:00 PM

I'm on the lookout for that yellow snow, Paula. lol. thanks, gw

Mike Gentile

Date: 2/4/2022 5:33:00 AM

Beautiful images GW! I would have opted for a snow blower but that doesn't rhyme!! Happy Friday!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/4/2022 10:50:00 AM

Ha, ha! That snow blower would show her! Hope things are well, Mike. P.S. Eat your heart out: We had a whole morning's worth of sunshine here in Chicago today. ~ ASC, America's Sunshine City :)

Valsa George

Date: 2/3/2022 7:58:00 PM

Hi Gershon,the snow flake being single had the fortune to get you and be dissolved into your being. If she were with company, she would have been dealt harsh with a smack of your shovel... Enjoyed your thought...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/4/2022 10:45:00 AM

Snowflake got lucky this time. ~ 'Shovel-Ready'