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A Haunted House

imagine any haunted house to have: Creaking stairways Whispering blinds Creepy doorways Blood-curdling sounds Spooky cob-webs Ominous darkness Ghastly shadows Dreadful loneliness Spine tingling shrieks Owls hooting Things that make Your skin crawl Foreboding terror An eerie silence yet squeaky rats A threatening suspense with fluttering bats. Thus a place crawling with, oversized gnats scurrying brats and all kinds of scary things lurking about except for scaredy-cats . Like me of the fraidy cats Tell me would you dare to venture Into such a house For a halloweenish midnight adventure ? (Ok happened to pass an allegedly haunted abandoned house that most people don't want to venture in and I enjoyed scarifying myself thinking about it in the poetic way above for fun) YIKES, I'M ALREADY SCARED.!

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/10/2023 4:14:00 PM

It was great fun to read this haunting poem once again, especially at this time of the year with Halloween rapidly approaching... Very good work, my friend :)

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 4/22/2020 8:48:00 PM

Hello zaynab … but wouldn't you like to investigate on a windy moonlit night. Might be interesting to watch a real life ghostly movie - thanks zaynab - Lindsay

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/19/2019 8:05:00 AM

I would walk as quickly as i could. LOL

Kelly Deschler

Date: 3/30/2019 7:46:00 PM

I might venture inside such a house, but not if I were alone ... I really enjoyed your haunting poem and the spooky atmosphere it creates in my mind... Great work my friend!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/8/2019 1:35:00 PM

I probably would venture into it just for curiosity. Well done, your house has just about everything.

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 2/11/2019 4:33:00 AM

Ha ha ha a perfect place for Halloween...or adventure. Enjoyed that. :)

Susan Mills

Date: 1/22/2019 2:43:00 PM

Hi! Halloween is my favorite holiday! Your poem really captures the essence of a haunted house. I've been to one in Cali.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 12/31/2018 9:04:00 AM

Hi Zaynab, there are so many haunted houses in this world of ours. Some do look the part, setting our minds to contemplate some dark images. I would always go into a hauted house. Your write has such wonderful imagery. Indeed, your words paint the heart of a haunted house onto your canvas. Such a wonderful write my friend. Have a very Happy New Year. Hugs....Mike. XX

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/25/2018 7:10:00 PM

I do love haunted houses; they've so many stories to tell if you can handle your hairs standing on end. An enjoyable poem.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/22/2018 5:02:00 PM

LOL! i love the way your mind flows with all the creepiness and then I think you skitter away! Fun one, Zaynab!

Muhammad Imtiaz

Date: 12/12/2018 6:31:00 AM

a good picture of the scary house. scary Halloween

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 10/16/2018 2:38:00 PM

Bonafide scarified! Awesome write! I'd go in during the, but not at night ;) xomo

CayCay Jennings

Date: 10/16/2018 3:04:00 AM

I loved your Halloween 'frolic' - a total delight to read and - no, I would not go in. I'm an official wimp and not ashamed of it! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 10/16/2018 1:31:00 AM

Nice Halloween Ode. A pagan festival. This is not what God did on the 7th day for sure. Thank you for reading my poem on that 7th day adventure. I am sure that we have different belief system and that is the blessing of pluralism. Kindest wishes to you, Kai

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/15/2018 3:14:00 PM

Oversized gnats, scrurrying bats, and scaredy-cats. This makes for a sweet poem which with a little adjusting, S. you could set to music!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/15/2018 2:29:00 PM

I too, like a good scare; yes a good haunted house would have all of those things, I think although, I've never been fond of cobwebs. I truly enjoyed this read; thanks for haunting our Soup.

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/15/2018 2:03:00 PM

Indeed you have so aptly expressed all of the requirements for an exemplary haunted house S.zaynab. I am not planning to visit !!! Happy Monday!!

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/15/2018 12:59:00 PM

You have written a fun scary write! Well done :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/15/2018 12:53:00 PM

Hello S.zaynal, ther would be a huge line up to get into this haunted house. This poem is scary. i do like this poem. Have a nice day my friend.

Chris Green

Date: 10/15/2018 12:33:00 PM

There was a house in my neighborhood when I was young that was rumored to be haunted. It was abandoned and looked like what you might imagine a haunted house to be...none of us were brave enough to enter. : ) Nicely done.