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A Handful of Haiku: Sunflowers

Sun looks down upon A field of yellow flowers Sees mirror image Sunflowers gaze up Stunned to see there beaming back Their own reflection

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Date: 5/12/2024 2:37:00 PM
How cool is this! Obvious to a poetic artist! Blessings! A fave!
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 5/14/2024 10:01:00 AM
Thank you, Kim.
Date: 5/12/2024 2:07:00 PM
such a cool observation, jim!
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 5/14/2024 10:01:00 AM
Ilene, many thanks.
Date: 5/12/2024 1:01:00 PM
Very clever.. I like the comparisons...
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 5/14/2024 10:00:00 AM
Thanks, S O.
Date: 5/12/2024 12:17:00 PM
Beautiful haiku
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 5/14/2024 10:00:00 AM
Thank you, Karen.

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