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A Ghostly Moon

A ghostly moon haunts a vista of blue; as white as the clouds She is peering through; a shy sprite making Her daytime debut. Luna's golden glow pales at Dawn's first light; like a beacon that only shines at night. A fragile image, as frail as a dove, She's a victim of unrequited love; chasing Sol across the heavens above. But time has decreed she'll never succeed; Sol keeps His lead; She can't increase Her speed. As daylight strips Her of Her golden hue, a pale Moon silently slips out of sight; chasing after a dream, She falls short of a tether from which She'll never be freed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 7/6/2023 12:02:00 PM
Emile, my friend, congratulations on your win. You have a wonderful ability to put scientific facts into stunning poetic images that always lead me into wonderful moments of new revelation and "a-ha! Well done! Blessings!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/6/2023 1:18:00 PM
Thanks, Sam; as always, I both welcome and appreciate your enjoyable comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/6/2023 1:25:00 AM
Congratulations on winning a placement in my contest, The Moon by Day, Emile. Please soup-mail me your e-mail address in order for me to send you the limited illustrated PDF copy of my book, The Seeds of Time. Thank you, Regards, Suzette
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/6/2023 8:16:00 AM
Thanks, Suzette, I appreciate the placement and have sent you my email, thanks again, my friend; Emile.
Date: 6/11/2023 3:21:00 PM
Hello Emile, It sounds to me that she will be haunted, because she can not be free. My friend, enjoy your evening. /Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/12/2023 4:39:00 AM
Good morning Emile, I am having my expresso coffee now. It is raining here. My friend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene\
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/11/2023 4:45:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene; it's always a treat to hear from you, my friend, Emile.

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