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A Gesture of Gratefulness

Our family’s visit to an ashram— Where parasitical monkeys haunt ’n hum. Creatures known for tricks and hanky-panky. So tussles ’tween visitor and monkey! Monkeys win— tussles with woman or man. Outwitting the monkey whoever can? So woes of the devotees are many; There doesn’t seem to be solution any! A li’l one came to us ’nd held her hand out; With a bottle of water, turned about; Came back again straight to my son swiftly Only to look for lice ’n his hair deftly! A surprising gesture of gratitude. We appreciated her attitude! *** Composed on October 18, 2017

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Date: 10/17/2017 6:03:00 AM
Beatiful poem,with a great rhyme and cadence. wonxderful poem that made me smile :)
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Ram R. V.
Date: 10/17/2017 6:50:00 AM
Thank you, Darren, for your spontaneous and hearty comments:-)
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Ram R. V.
Date: 10/17/2017 6:44:00 AM
Thank you, Darren, for your spontaneous and hearty comments:-)
Date: 10/16/2017 2:29:00 PM
I love this! Fave! xomo :)
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Ram R. V.
Date: 10/16/2017 4:12:00 PM
Thank you, my fave:-)

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