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Red Lanterns Outside the city where the pomegranates grow, Red lanterns hang where green orchards glow. They swing in the breeze, they dance and then freeze, Red glistening balls say cheese, play yo yo and tease. Outside the city where the pomegranates grow, Red lanterns hang where green orchards glow. The butterflies flutter in, the bees swarm in, Their honey they churn in, their lips sugared in Outside the city where the pomegranates grow, Red lanterns hang where green orchards glow. Arched rainbows above them, midnight stars cover them, Spring season blossoms them, summers in hands toss them. Outside the city where the pomegranates grow, Red lanterns hang where green orchards glow. Poets are inspired to verbalize, lovers flock to romanticize Children fly through to chastize, their pets follow to energize, Outside the city where the pomegranates grow, Red lanterns hang where green orchards glow. Coronated princesses in dreams become temptresses, Songbirds in high spiritedness transform it all into seductiveness. Outside the city where the pomegranates grow, Red lanterns hang where green orchards glow. April 18, 2016 For Julia Ward A First Line Prompt

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Date: 5/4/2016 9:05:00 AM
Congratulations!What a treat1
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/4/2016 10:56:00 AM
Thanks Sara!
Date: 5/4/2016 3:20:00 AM
A big congratulations on your wonderful win:)
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/4/2016 4:13:00 AM
Thanks Jo!
Date: 5/3/2016 3:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Balveen...
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/4/2016 2:49:00 AM
Thanks Meenakshi!
Date: 5/3/2016 11:33:00 AM
Congrats, Balveen, on this superb win.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/4/2016 2:49:00 AM
Thanks Karam!
Date: 5/3/2016 11:14:00 AM
Congratulations Balveen, on your high placement in the contest...
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/4/2016 2:50:00 AM
Thanks Charlie!
Date: 5/3/2016 10:58:00 AM
Amazing poem, Balveen! Congratulations on your well-deserved podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/4/2016 2:50:00 AM
Thanks Sandra! I'm happy, too.
Date: 5/3/2016 10:33:00 AM
Balveen - your poems keep winning in my contests. I love your style! Congratulations!
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Julia Ward
Date: 5/4/2016 5:50:00 AM
That's a lovely reminder... :)
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/4/2016 2:56:00 AM
Julia, I'm glad you like them! It reminded me of a pomegranate tree I once had which was bountifully laden and forever glowing like red lanterns. Hugs, Balveen
Date: 4/21/2016 5:52:00 AM
Dear Balveen, Amazing imagery. Entire poem is enriched with brilliant & outstanding literature. My best wishes for the contest. Super 7 from me................with love
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/22/2016 11:37:00 AM
Thanks Manmath for your generous words!

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