A Different Meter

A very novice poet am I, 
a fledgling, just learning how to fly.
My thoughts may climb as I flap my wings
but my anchored feet to this earth still clings.
I hope in time these wings won't teeter
and I can soar  in a different meter.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 7/10/2023 2:06:00 PM
I hope you can fly like an Eagle Nancy...
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Date: 7/9/2023 8:03:00 PM
What a magnificent composition, an exquisite portrayal, Nancy! I am enamored by this, Nancy! I have transcended my amateur status and discovered my rhythmic harmony, to which I shall adhere resolutely!
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 7/10/2023 10:57:00 AM
Hi Sotto, I actually viewed as a wordsmith. Thanks for the visit and your gracious comments.
Date: 7/9/2023 1:28:00 PM
ha! i love this, nancy! i'm no longer a novice but i found my meter (and my metier) and i'm sticking to it!
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 7/9/2023 2:11:00 PM
ilene I truly admire your ability to write a poem a day. I write some times early in the am and then see it later and regret having put it out there. I hope things are better for you then when you wrote the pits poem and always appreciate your comments.
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