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A Deluge In My Heart

A Deluge In My Heart My heart is a titanic in the middle of the sea Waiting for the ocean waves to rise monstrously Emotions have now become ice-bergs As my sightless heart crashes into the bergs Like a blind bird crashing into a tree My titanic being devoured by the sea Pain of all the lies and betrayals Have left my heart with lines and trails Causing a leak behind my eye Tears dropping down to my heart Leaving an abrupt deluge in my heart My heart is flooded and my brain left dry My heart like a ruby panting fire That burns all form of life and feeling Making excuses of how it is a form of healing Saving only what is pure and will survive Gnarly rising, the deluge is reign now Slowing the fire down not realising how It is purifying the dark pines That are sharp and painful like sewing needles The deluge left my heart deserted and feeble.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/13/2017 5:53:00 AM
The comparison to the sea is so strong and powerful, and your poem speaks with great sadness.... So well written, and welcome back to Poetry Soup :)
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Ramadhan Dunia
Date: 4/18/2017 11:00:00 AM
Thank you! I'm happy to be back and I hope I get more recognition this time.

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