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A Day Outside

It's nice out. It's sunny. Warm. and funny. I ran. Have fun. And skate. with my mate. We got tired. then got hired. to mow a lawn. then we yawned. We went home. I got something to eat. it was a treat. then we went to sleep.

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Skat A

Date: 5/21/2016 11:09:00 AM

dakota, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/9/2015 7:17:00 PM

Dakota, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 5/9/2015 5:07:00 PM

Dakota, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT