A Cry From a Broken Heart

A broken heart can happen
to anyone at any age.
Mine came just when our lives were poised
to turn another page.
Twenty years of love and marriage
with three children almost grown.
We were looking forward to a life
with the two of us alone.

We had planned a short vacation
without a single child in tow.
Though invited they had plans with friends 
and didn’t want to go.
We would celebrate the 4th with them
and my birthday seven-seven.
Our July anniversary was coming, 
anticipation was a given.

The morning of July 4th he brought
my coffee to my bed.
I was off to work for a few hours.
“Hurry home,” was all he said.
I was finishing up the bookwork,
without a single worry.
The phone rang. I thought it would be he,
just urging me to hurry. 

His friend had made the phone call
and he wouldn’t tell me why.
He said I must come to the hospital,
hung up the phone without goodbye.
A doctor was waiting for me
to tell me my love was dead.
My head spun and I fainted
without hearing all he said.

I don’t know why God took him
just before our holiday
or why my love was buried on 
my forty-fourth birthday.
A lifetime of loving dreams condensed
to brief report in this short  rhyme.
That’s how I know a broken heart
can come at any age or time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/24/2015 3:12:00 PM
Joyce,, congratulations on your Broken Heart win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/24/2015 1:05:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb winning write Joyce!Subtle emotions truly penned!
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Date: 6/30/2012 7:33:00 PM
i read this one yesterday and ment to leave a comment. but time got away from me.it was this important that i come back because it touched me. i too am one that has been left behind and i feel that we share this feeling. and are give a licence to write about it. because we really know how it feels. any age any time. God Bless Joyce.
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Date: 6/26/2012 9:48:00 PM
touched,deep,feel your pain,pray and ask for strength,great but sad write
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Date: 6/26/2012 3:10:00 PM
Firstly, thank you for reading my poem and now I would like to offer a prayer for the both of you, as I know you will never find a logical reason for being ripped out of your lives, but you should know that that was a natural event, and we live in two realms spiritual and natural, and you have a spiritual bond that can never be broken. Only you can know the pain, and I pray God gives you the strength to bear it. Thank you for sharing your heart with us. m.r.
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Date: 6/26/2012 3:08:00 PM
Oh my, Joyce, this poem recites as if it had been just yesterday. When something like this would happen so unexpectedly, I can imagine that the memory stays fresh forever and ever. A heartbreaking story of loss, that I know must be stirred again, as the holiday approaches. God Bless
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Date: 6/26/2012 1:37:00 PM
Brought tears to my eyes Joyce, such a sad and touching piece
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