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A Christmas Child

A face presses up to a store window display of an angel in ermine with arms bangled and boots thigh high. Mannikin thighs harder than the fake tree in the corner festooned with popcorn ... stale now in the airless window. The eyes of the child glow looking in as mannikin eyes look out at the turtle-necked tourists stopping to smile at the child watching a toy train wind past the feet of the angel in ermine and her glistening red boots. The train is filled with jeweled brooches, earrings, and a necklace of diamonds. Growing tired now, the child walks to a cardboard box at the corner of this store where her mother sits on an old pillow holding a flute to be played as its red carrying case fills with coins. Coins that will never buy diamonds. Hauntingly beautiful Christmas carols her mother plays while the child sits on the sidewalk watching feet pass and coins drop. Soon, they will walk across the street to a cafe where she will drink hot chocolate before they return to this box to sleep in the silent night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/13/2009 2:47:00 PM
This was wonderful.Really enjoyed but kinda sad.Thanks so much for your very kind comment.Teresa
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Date: 12/9/2009 1:00:00 PM
This is to sad but yet so true. as many are homless this time of year Blessings thanks for your coment
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Date: 12/8/2009 10:57:00 AM
Magnificent, Sue, such a depiction in your words and verses.. very visual too... enjoyed this very much... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 12/6/2009 11:33:00 PM
One of your best Sue.Rgds Brian Thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 12/6/2009 3:50:00 PM
Wow! This is a thought provoking about a sad reality that is far to often true. The emotion comes through this experience in a gripping way. One of your best Sue. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comment. Blessings to you this Christmas season and in the New Year too. Karen
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Date: 12/6/2009 2:34:00 PM
The first time I saw people living atop cardboard boxes on the streets of New York, I couldn't believe what I was looking at. That was years ago and today there are more homeless families than ever. I almost dread seeing them when I visit NY over Christmas. It will be cold. They will have no food. Your poem tugs hard at my heartstrings, Sue, for this may have been written as fiction, but it is really all too true. God bless you, Carolyn
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Date: 12/3/2009 1:35:00 AM
HEART-BREAKINg! Especially because it exists in the real world.. You brought tears to my eyes with this powerful writing. Sue. Love, Lainie
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