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A Beautiful Angel

Gazing from afar, amid still frame silence... Watching her making way unto the parks bench Blue skies taking a drag from my cigarette; sketching Divinities staircase within my mind; transcending this Autumn's Canvas but a silhouette her bridals path winding, through a breath.. Reaching out her gentle hand whileas a white dove, the symbol of love Descends from it's perch atop porcelain clouds to drink, from this her tears Pangful spheres risen from a crystal heart; cast aside yesteryears cherub wings... She awaits endless dreams; to awaken from this valley of broken things; her beauty.

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Robin Davis

Date: 2/5/2014 11:50:00 AM

Johnny Such a beautiful and amazing write. A wonderful "dream" of this angel that inspired this gorgeous poem. Nicely done Thanks for the great comment on my Crush You poem.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/27/2013 10:42:00 AM

John, ... Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. It was nice seeing it on the Poetry Soup-- HOME PAGE. Always a poetry soup friend <3 = LINDA

Skat A

Date: 10/27/2013 1:08:00 AM

Hi John, CONGRATULATIONS ;) on having your poem featured................... LOVE SKAT

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/26/2013 2:38:00 PM

Just lovely John an earth born angel! Light & Love

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 7/3/2013 6:45:00 AM

What a beautiful picture you have painted here for us to see, as beautiful as Your mind. Thanks for sharing. Sorry I can't get on line too much as I am still very sick, but I'm getting better.Thanks for reading my poetry...... Lucilla

Debbie Knapp

Date: 6/26/2013 6:49:00 PM

My Friend, What a beautiful thought. It was as if you were really seeing everything you wrote. I think maybe angels are close to you in many ways.

Nefretiti Morant

Date: 6/17/2013 6:40:00 AM

What a beautiful snippet of thoughts. I felt as if i were watching the scene unfold before my very eyes. Beautiful!!

Skat A

Date: 5/25/2013 11:54:00 AM

very nice John.......... xox........ kisses and all SKAT

Dawn Mclaughlin

Date: 5/24/2013 2:07:00 PM

Hi John thank you for such beautiful comment's. A beautiful write angelic and sounds like a divine being x

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/24/2013 9:01:00 AM

Hi John..such a beautiful painting you ve created here..You re definitely inspired.Keep your ink flowing..So enchanting and going to my favs-always Charma

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/24/2013 6:55:00 AM

I enjoyed your poem and the mood you created. I don't know why but the line where you take a drag on the cigarette pulled me into the poem and somehow made it seem more real. I seen your thoughtful comment to Eileen's poem and thought I would check out your work. If you have a chance check out the poem I written in Responce to hers that I have posted. Welcome to the soup

Grace Martin

Date: 5/24/2013 1:11:00 AM

Beautiful write.. Welcome unto poe-site.. I am looking forward to seeing more of your writes.. ~Grace

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/22/2013 3:40:00 PM

Lovely imagery you have written here...There is beauty and sadness here. They often go hand in hand. You have portrayed this well! Thanks for your visits. :)

Sasha Maharaj

Date: 5/22/2013 2:45:00 AM

Beautiful indeed :)

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 5/21/2013 2:45:00 PM

Hello John, And what a beautiful Canvas you have painted here for us....Sad as I know what broken dreams are, I think we all do. Your lovely words drift down slowly on this heart. Thank you it is wonderful. Love, Shar

Cortney Bartholomew

Date: 5/21/2013 12:50:00 PM

John! :) yay! so glad your back! :) absolutely beautiful poem!!! looking forward to seeing more...i just came back to the site not too long ago myself..God Bless!! :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 5/21/2013 12:25:00 PM

Love this Johnny,,,,, welcome to poetrysoup, I seen you on Annie's page. I will be reading your next poem,, again, welcome ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/21/2013 9:24:00 AM

- Johnny, welcome to P-Soup - Thanks for your lovely poem, you write very well. - Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us. - Would appreciate a visit from you at my poems. - Good luck, Johnny! - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)