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- Haiku X 14 - Your Soul -

Kneeling by my mother's grave All the flowers had faded away Her soul breathed on me 06.05.2013 A-L Andresen :) *Miss you mom !

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Edward Orozco

Date: 6/14/2013 10:11:00 PM

Sad, yet powerful write!! I'm adding you to my favorite poets actually u might b the only person I have faved... In a over a year! :D- Edward

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/15/2013 1:57:00 AM

- Thank you it is an honor! - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Edward. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 5/18/2013 11:10:00 AM

Nice Haiku but it's so sad my friend Anne Lise but I know she is happy with our Creator....Have a great weekend..hugssss, Maria

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/18/2013 11:12:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Maria. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Len Gasun

Date: 5/15/2013 7:25:00 AM

A beautifully sad poem my dearest friend Anne Lise. I'm so sorry for your loss. I can feel how much you love and miss your mom through this marvelous Haiku of yours. God bless you always! Thank you so much for sharing. love much, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/15/2013 7:30:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Leonora. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Kathryn Collins

Date: 5/13/2013 8:10:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise, No words to comment - only profound feelings. love, Kathy

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/13/2013 11:11:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Kathryn. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan

Date: 5/12/2013 9:21:00 AM

I know too well the meaning and emotion expressed in these three brief, insightful lines... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/12/2013 1:47:00 PM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Karen Anglesey

Date: 5/11/2013 3:29:00 PM

This one took my breath away. Absoulutely stunning. Have a beautiful day !

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/12/2013 3:38:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Karen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/10/2013 7:18:00 PM

You can feel the sadness coming from your heart. Happy Mother's Day to you. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/11/2013 5:26:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Phyllis. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Ellinor Sador

Date: 5/10/2013 4:02:00 AM

Wonderfull poem and one really feels the sadness.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/10/2013 4:03:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Sabien. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Ellinor Sador

Date: 5/10/2013 4:00:00 AM

:(.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/10/2013 4:01:00 AM

Thank U !

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 5/9/2013 10:55:00 AM

I feel your sorrow. I have written a tribute to moms. You Mom Angel lives eternally. Touchy Haiku love

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2013 10:59:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments my friend Manel. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/9/2013 2:01:00 AM

i am so taken by this ku, anne...so much subtance and poignancy in just a few words... i miss my mother and father as well...tenderly scribed!... may your day be as sweet as you!..:) huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2013 3:19:00 AM

...... sooooo taken :) - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Nette. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/9/2013 2:00:00 AM

i am so taken by this ku, anne...so much subtance and poignancy in just a few words... i miss my mother and father as well...tenderly scribed!... may your day be as sweet as you!..:) huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2013 3:18:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Nette. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Erich Goller

Date: 5/8/2013 1:37:00 PM

that's a beautiful poem in memeory of your Mother, Thanks for sharing it,God bless you.Hugs!Erich

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/8/2013 2:26:00 PM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Erich. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 5/8/2013 1:21:00 PM

Anne Lise; I like this. It is nice that we visit our Mothers grave. My Mom passed away last September. Many blessings and Happy Mother's day. Lucilla

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/8/2013 1:25:00 PM

- Thanks for your comments and your visit, Lucilla. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Painted Hunter

Date: 5/8/2013 12:56:00 PM

My, Anne...I don't know what to say...it's extraordinary...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/8/2013 12:59:00 PM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Caleb. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Judy Konos

Date: 5/8/2013 11:06:00 AM

Very nice...and unusal.....thank you

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/8/2013 12:45:00 PM

- Thanks for your comments and your visit, Judy. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/8/2013 11:01:00 AM

Oh, Anne Lise! My heart goes to you! I miss my MAMA too! She is there...in your heart. Lovely write! Your mama would be proud! Hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/8/2013 11:03:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Eileen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/8/2013 10:21:00 AM

So sad... and a beautiful haiku you've penned... I pray yours too will remember you when the time comes...AO

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/8/2013 10:42:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments A.O. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/7/2013 11:09:00 PM

So sad :( A great honor to her, though! Loved that last line... it put me in the moment of it all.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/8/2013 2:03:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Timothy. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 5/7/2013 2:56:00 PM

Gripping & stunning. I bow in reverence to this Haiku.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/7/2013 3:08:00 PM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Drake. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Therese Bacha

Date: 5/7/2013 1:43:00 PM

Anne, so so touching, how i wish we were next to each other in the same city, we would have gone out and shared and shared till your feelings get a rest. Take care , stay strong, as we have no choice sometimes. Love Terry xoxo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/7/2013 2:53:00 PM

It's almost 2 years since my mother died Terry, feeling her soul at her grave. -I miss her a lot. ---- Yes, it had been cozy ...... You are welcome to Norway.- - - Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Terry. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 5/7/2013 11:58:00 AM

Very touching. Losing one`s parent is a sad thing. l went through this, and it is not easy to accept even now.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/7/2013 12:01:00 PM

- Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Ndaba. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/7/2013 11:48:00 AM

Very true feeling it is. Where there's love and respect, vibration of heart speaks truly. My next monoku it is. Thanks...., loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/7/2013 12:00:00 PM

I will read it. - - Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments bl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/7/2013 11:13:00 AM

It is metaphysical! Having lost both my parents at a very early age and having been on their grave many a time, this is the best way that I could express that feeling! THANK YOU!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/7/2013 11:38:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Demetrios. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan

Date: 5/7/2013 10:13:00 AM

Beautiful! I know exactly how you must feel. I've felt the same for a very long time. I especially like the note at the bottom. Very sweet... I'm posting a new haiku about my father tomorrow... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/7/2013 10:16:00 AM

I will read it. - - Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Jack. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)