THE WHITE CREEP ch 1


In the far woodlands of Moscow when an English teacher named Mr. Peter Samson along with his school from California came there for a boot camp. Mr. Sam was trotting down along a narrow path towards his boot camp. There was an eerie silence along the journey. The place was dim-dark and desolated. Creepy and ambient sounds were echoing past Sam’s ears. It was just the set-up of his tragedy.

Mr. Sam was staggering across the path, all afraid! He courageously hastened towards his boot camp. CRASH! A tree fell on his path, he didn’t know what to do then. He saw another passage nearby a debris which served as the entrance to his boot camp. He walked till his legs became thin branches of trees. Along the path he heard voices which were disintegrated into fractions and which made him frightened, like- sa-aa.....mm…---my, y.....o—u........ arrrrrr---------eeeee deeea......... He tried not to hallucinate some figure out of those eerie voices. A couple of minutes later he found the entrance to his so-called boot camp as if it was a boot camp, we can describe the place as a GRAVEYARD WHICH WAS SO GRAVE! There were no humans sleeping, but SKELETONS were. The fire camp was off. Complete darkness was filled up in the camp. Again the same voice but clearly passed through the tunnel of his ears whispering-Sammy you will be dead sooooon.........rem...mem...BER. His adrenaline burst open and ran faster than a cheetah. His camp was just like the dead bodies rotting in the holocaust of Jews. He was Sad, Scared and Suspicious.

As he ran inside the office of the boot camp, he peeked through the hole and saw a white figure running past the trees, this scene he made him macabre and took two steps backwards and BA AAM! He slipped into a hole joining to a small cave. He fell down from twelve feet, he got himself hurt, but he managed to wake up, and he crawled past the cave barely being able to see a thing. The cave was stinking with dead nocturnal birds and animals. He hastened before his nose would rot in the cave of stink. And as he moved along, the cave shrank in girth, taking him to the point where the cave ends. He stood there, when he was about to go nuts. AND SUDDENLY WITH A GASP!!!

Ch. 1 closes
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  1. Date: 4/22/2023 4:40:00 AM
    pls help me to reach at least 15 views for ch 2
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