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1/10/2019 2:37:40 PM
desola Lois Posts: 5
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betrayal
A while ago, she was here Promising to hold my hand till forever Never letting go she said Tears shed together Jokes laughed at together Hurts felt together A while ago, she was that mountain that can never be moved Firmly she stood by me
Until forever ended. She was a mountain, now she is the wind Passing never to return to its starting point The hurts that we felt together was the very knife that was used to cut through my very heart My trust and hope was her ship The tears we shed together was the sea that she sailed on Our laughter was the sound of her mockery roaring and echoing
Slowly and slowly as I descended in the very sea that we made I asked myself when is forever? Is there a forever?
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