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8/12/2011 4:27:30 AM Jessica Wilson Posts: 2	You have brough back the old me, I never thought that could possibly be. The things and thoughts we share, Makes the loss easier to bare. We have endured things that are the same, Which we were not the ones to blame. I am glad to have a friend in you, Who would have thought it to be true. We have had our fights and more, But what are true friends for. Let's hope these feelings continue to grow, For I personally want to be the first to know. I hope above all you can see, What you truely mean to me.
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8/12/2011 4:29:04 AM Jessica Wilson Posts: 2	This is my first time putting my poems out for anyone to see. If you have an input please feel free to post it. Thank You.
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