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Orchid Woman

Oh you know the type—
the orchid woman

a cosmopolitan who cosmo sips
between snips of gist
her charisma a starship —collides
with your star-full eyes
supernova for Casanova
her pouty lips knit a magazine smile
rows of sugar-white pearls
strung shiny straight
behind wet-red slicks of a Revlon stick
—cherry-juice bait dilates your want to taste

orchid woman’s glamorized mouth
for the masses to idolize
for many to fantasize
for her to tantalize
and advertise 
there’s no need to compromise
with you 
or your penny-candy conversation—
when beauty is legal tender
why invest in a waste of words?

ooh, orchid woman  w-i-l-d
an exotic sun-tanned narcotic
erotic her despotic bloom 
quixotic your contemplation;
your entangled-limbs-expectation 
that this frilly filly blooms just for you
and oh!  just look how the honey makers buzz
and money-makers spend their sums—
worker bees blinded by her blonde neon 
fall in her wake…
or maybe “diamond pro’s” bling 
stings and wrings their eyes
…who cares who falls..
when mere red rose adorations 
and sticky sap Hallmark incantations
bear not the fruits of 24-karat donations— 

Mmm! Mmm! 
her traipse does shake like mango jelly sweet
orchid woman’s long-stemmed catwalk walk;
full-rounded  bouncy-buoyant..  yet racy 
yup.. a thoroughbred— she’ll have you ridin’ high
to your credit and blame
you won’t feel her stiletto tips 
when she diva-gold-digs ya
as nothing more than a runway-ramp
all slinky-strut-hips  
and stay-the-night-vamp
till fly girl wields her strappy high-heels 
in a rhythmical click-clack 
all over the next middle-age stage

indeed! orchid woman
a hot-house hottie
fussy stuffy lil hussy— 
...too much water?
….not enough water?!
oh no! she’s wilted—
sniffle.. snivel.. “where did I go wrong?!!”

mm-hmm.. high maintenance is  s-u-c-h  a turn on…
yeah… orchid woman is  w-i-l-d  (eye roll..)

Copyright © Susan Ashley | Year Posted 2024

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Date: 5/8/2024 1:15:00 PM

wow, this is amazing metaphor extended all the way to the interesting ending. Love this.
Date: 5/6/2024 5:14:00 PM

This is just delicious, Susan, everything wicked and juicy of the forbidden fruit, then the inevitable fall, just love 'supernova for Casanova' and 'penny candy coversation' - sweet and hard at once, another winner for you!
Date: 5/6/2024 7:08:00 AM

This was so much fun to read. It’s filled with imagery and intrigue. Bravo!
Date: 5/6/2024 5:57:00 AM

Dear Susan, I loved the essence of the cosmopolitan woman with such wonderful imagery and sharp wit, along with the orchid woman, which seems to be a symbol of allure and complexity. Susan, your playful language and clever observations reveal the dichotomy between surface glamour and inner depth, showing the nature of attraction and desire. A very captivating exploration of femininity and perception. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 5/6/2024 5:33:00 AM

Oh, wow, Susan, you have wowed me again with this dynamic poem. The assonance in each stanza is striking and adds punch to each image "idolize, fantasize, tantalize" and "exotic, narcotic, erotic." And the poem clips right along, as with this fast woman of the poem! Well-done, good read. Carol Louise
Date: 5/5/2024 9:30:00 PM

Orchids! I had two of them and both died. To water or not to water! Always a dilemma. And to meet an orchid woman would present the same erotic dilemma. Fall for her or not. Her beauty is impeccable, her mien out of this world. How well you describe her in metaphoric terms. Such imagery is from a difficult but favorite plant. Is she unattainable? Great imagery. Great poetry.
Date: 5/5/2024 8:22:00 PM

hmm. I guess I'm not familiar with the tantalizing, temptress-type you've portrayed, Susan... Though I have taken an intensive inter(active) course with Raggedy Anne and Second-hand Rose, as well as exchanged meaningful platonic eyeball rolls-in the-hay with Calamity Jane and Annie-get-your-gun-and-salute! lol. ~ Call Me Ish-Male (Ish in Hebrew = Man. How about that?!)
Date: 5/5/2024 4:56:00 PM

I felt I was experiencing glamor and glitz as I read your poem about the orchid woman. Such descriptive words and unique vocabulary (hot-house hottie, fussy stuffy hussy, etc) Despite all her glamour, she wilted (perhaps from age) showing me, that despite her allure, she was a shallow woman indeed. A beautiful read! Great job! Have a great evening, hugs, Sara
Date: 5/5/2024 4:07:00 PM

Dear Susan, your poem perfectly portrays the essence of the "Orchid Woman," a woman who is both stunning and meticulous in her appearance. And explores beauty's captivating nature and apathy, along with the vilification and unjust norms imposed on women. You skillfully employ vivid and enticing descriptive language to paint a vivid picture of the orchid woman. Phrases such as "cosmo sips," "rows of sugar-white pearls," and "cherry-juice bait" are used to enhance the description. The way you choose your words evokes a feeling of opulence and sparkle, but it also implies a lack of depth and shallowness. The poetry is enhanced by the use of alliteration ("pouty lips," "sticky sap," "rhythmical click-clack") and simile ("traipse does shake like mango jelly sweet").
Date: 5/5/2024 12:34:00 PM

My dear friend Susan, This poem paints a vivid portrait of the "orchid woman," a figure who embodies glamour, allure, and complexity. The imagery is rich and evocative, drawing the reader into the world of this cosmopolitan, cosmopolitan-sipping persona. It offers a thought-provoking commentary on beauty, desire, and the illusions we construct around those who embody societal ideals. It challenges notions of authenticity and urges readers to reconsider the value of substance over surface allure.
Date: 5/5/2024 12:28:00 PM

A wild woman you have caught in a poetic jar and eyed her from all sides! Fantastic imagery, great rhythm, alliteration, and metaphors. A fave ~ Kim
Date: 5/5/2024 12:27:00 PM

i savoured every line of this, the wordplay, inventive word combos, internal rhyme, reminds me a bit of a poet called abigail parry..i'd be proud to write something like this, you should submit it to a professional comp or journal cos it's easily good enough
Date: 5/5/2024 10:54:00 AM

Ha! Artificiality at its poetic best. Funny thing is, though intelligent men (and women) know this they still fall for it (her) hook line and sinker. Sophisticated sexuality on full display, for those in want of heart. Good stuff Suze

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