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The Tormented Moon

The.isolated moon in the far arc of her epogee,
As she searches Earth's surface in cold winter's hemisphere,
She bites her tongue of protest of what she will never be,
And throws sharp knives of jealousy into the atmosphere.

In the cold moon's distant musings, her echoes can't be heard, 
And but for the crunch of snow, silence waits for morning sun.
A blizzard has filled a reservoir, and so needs prepared,
Yet moon added sparkly diamonds to selfish pleasure's run.

Winter moon shivers with knowledge that her days will end,
And a yellow moon will rise during six months of the year.
The anguished, tormented moon whose dark murmurs now portend, 
She will vanquish the yellow moon, and once more reappear.


Copyright © Hilda Greenhough | Year Posted 2024

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Date: 5/16/2024 2:49:00 PM

winter moon wants to reign all year, Vry nicely penned
Date: 5/16/2024 12:06:00 PM

Hi Hilda , a beautifully thought provoking read , we tend to always focus on the sun and stars and the moon which controls most of the planet including us is left forgotten . An inspiring poem , Brilliantly written . Danny
Date: 5/16/2024 10:15:00 AM

Excellent insights all through, Hilda. Your poem highlights the reasons why the moon earns all the admiration. Beautifully written.
Date: 5/16/2024 8:47:00 AM

Wow, this should be a POTD. It has depth and sttimulates our minds. The imagery you used is outstanding. And the personification is spectacular. Pangie Romios
Date: 5/16/2024 5:44:00 AM

The moon's jealousy and rivalry is poetically highlighted in beautiful words and sentiments. "Winter moon shivers with knowledge that her days will end, And a yellow moon will rise during six months of the year." Yes, fate is never stable. It will have its contingency in turn. A beautiful poem, dear Hilda.
Date: 5/14/2024 6:57:00 PM

You have opened up new vistas of vision for me with this incredible write, Hilda. Never thought or knew about any of this. Always looked at the moon as a cold, lifeless 'orb.' Thanks, Gershon
Date: 5/13/2024 9:57:00 PM

Hilda, your captivating poem has a brooding quality, and is expressed by means of lovely images. I love this gorgeous tale of the night sky. Blessings.
Date: 5/13/2024 6:41:00 PM

Hilda, A very interesting take on the moon and the seasonal personalities it has. A very clever idea for this poem.
Date: 5/13/2024 10:46:00 AM

Ah, this is unusual- and very lovely, your images....enjoyed
Date: 5/13/2024 9:20:00 AM

Dear Hilda, A haunting portrayal of longing and envy, personifying the moon's silent anguish and jealousy. I loved the imagery of the isolated moon and its musings under the cold winter sky, creating a poignant, melancholy atmosphere. Your use of language is evocative, capturing the moon's torment and eventual triumph over its perceived rival. What a captivating reflection on the complexities of human emotions mirrored in the celestial realm. Brilliantly penned! - Blessings, my friend, Daniel
Date: 5/13/2024 6:39:00 AM

Wow this is so beautiful ethereal and theres so much depth in what youv conveyed here in such a metaphorical manner! What a profound write this is! I especially love “ Winter moon shivers with knowledge that her days will end“ soul hitting!! So good! “ In the cold moon's distant musings, her echoes can't be heard, ” love that! This is a fave for me! Sending you light always
Date: 5/13/2024 6:16:00 AM

fabulous descriptions throughout, Hilda. Your poem brings to fore why the moon deserves all the adulations. Lovely write.
Date: 5/12/2024 10:34:00 PM

I don't know where you live. Is it winter there? In Malta, we are on the threshold of summer and must reduce my night's blankets. Still, your wintry imagery is enticing. Hope you have pleasant days.
Date: 5/12/2024 4:32:00 PM

exquisite poem, one that flowed with beautiful words and imagery. I found your poem captivating dear Hilda. I especially liked these lines for they created emotion in the imagery: She bites her tongue of protest of what she will never be, And throws sharp knives of jealousy into the atmosphere. Am faving this poem. Wishing you a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara

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