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When Silence Speaks

When silence speaks in broken dialects, to harmonize hurt, 
I ponder, would the sky unravel synonyms for serenity, 
amidst piercing thunder that strikes through raining regrets~
upon flowers, swaying forsaken, to butterfly ballads? 

But will oblivious eyes, roaming the blackness of selfish spheres~
where prayers are abandoned as meaningless metaphors, 
ever feel the darkness we carry, when tears no longer flow in lakes with swans, to be seen? 

It is in melted muteness, we reveal realness of suppressed pain,
as childhood fears scribbled as forbidden secrets~
rewind on repeat through holographic lens of life,
mirroring bloodstained fingerprints etched across linen of chastity…

So tonight, when blue moon in my mind ascends in insomniac stillness,
listen to the sulfuric sins scattered as flashbacks of an onyx rose, 
as vandalized veins scream in helplessness,
awaiting a sculptured sunrise that bleeds balmy ointments for burnt blisters,
while I remain, in mists of misery, weaving prose,
to erase tattooed torment that stole starry symphonies within my soul. ..

Copyright © Ink Empress | Year Posted 2024

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Date: 5/9/2024 4:48:00 PM

This is a deep poem with a philosophical look at silence. It goes to the root of fears. Good luck with the contest.
Date: 5/9/2024 6:23:00 AM

So many great lines. A great contender for Craig’s contest.
Date: 5/9/2024 4:40:00 AM

"Erasing tattooed torment that stole starry symphonies from within the soul", Very nicely penned
Date: 5/9/2024 1:06:00 AM

Silence speaking in broken dialects suggests so much. Blue moon ascending in insomniac stillness is a powerful image. Here the question is will "the sky unravel synonyms for serenity, amidst piercing thunder that strikes through raining regrets".The darkness and despair we carry within are never noticed by oblivious eyes as long as tears don't run down our cheeks in streams. It is in muteness, we reveal suppressed pain. Yet there is hope of a 'sculptured sunrise that bleeds balmy ointments for burnt blisters,". This poem of pain, torment, hope and loneliness reflect the nuances of life and the inevitable vagaries of human existence. Another marvelous poem , dear Empress.
Date: 5/8/2024 7:28:00 PM

Your poem explores the profound intricacies of grief, loneliness, and the inherent human longing for solace, dear Ink. The evocative depictions take the reader to a place where the seamless integration of nature and human emotions creates a symphony of raw and unrestrained potency. The poem's creepy look is intensified by the references to past transgressions woven into recollections and the depiction of a blue moon ascending in a state of sleeplessness. These elements accentuate the speaker's anguish and their desperate want for solace. Your poetry explores the intricacies of the human experience, eliciting a spectrum of emotions and capturing the timeless battle for serenity amidst challenges.
Date: 5/8/2024 6:08:00 PM

Your words echo through the halls of memory, a poignant story of hurt and silent words that scar, even through all that pain, the soothing balm of your poetic skillful words covers me, well done Ink, its a winner for sure !
Date: 5/8/2024 2:55:00 PM

this is an excellent entry for the contest; some memorable lines with very good imagery and alliteration..i predict a top placement for this!
Date: 5/8/2024 2:24:00 PM

Interesting lines penned for the contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara K
Date: 5/8/2024 1:08:00 PM

Always you use such fascinating images with your creative flair with adjectives! Hope you get a win, my friend. You deserve it.
Date: 5/8/2024 12:41:00 PM

Your poem is a profound exploration of the intricacies of pain, silence, and the longing for solace. The imagery is rich and evocative, drawing the reader into a world where emotions and nature intertwine in a symphony of raw intensity.The final stanzas of the poem convey a sense of longing for redemption and healing, as the speaker seeks solace in the promise of a sculptured sunrise that bleeds balmy ointments for burnt blisters. The imagery of a blue moon ascending in insomniac stillness and the reference to sulfuric sins scattered as flashbacks add a haunting quality to the poem, underscoring the depth of the speaker's pain and the desperate search for relief.. Your poem is a moving exploration of the human experience, capturing the complexity of emotions and the enduring quest for inner peace amidst the storms of life.
Date: 5/8/2024 11:02:00 AM

Dearest Inky, your opening line sets up every exquisite word that follows. What a brilliant image of "broken dialects." As always, your command of imagery is awesome - "vandalized veins," "bleeds balmy ointments," "melted muteness." You have harnessed this theme with your amazing gift of poetic expression. Just awesome! Best wishes for the contest, dear friend. Blessings! Samzy~
Date: 5/8/2024 10:48:00 AM

So delicate and beautiful, dear Ink- the ending is so sad, I wish your hopes will come true, to heal "burnt blisters" making "prose"....
Date: 5/8/2024 10:00:00 AM

When silence speaks in broken dialects, to harmonize hurt, Mmmm that line hits goooood…prayers are abandoned as meaningless metaphors, ooo child … sulfuric sins scattered as flashbacks of an onyx rose, ooo gorgeous!!!! It is in melted muteness, we reveal realness of suppressed pain, the sense on loneliness in that line!!! Mmm .. this weave is breathtaking papi!!!
Date: 5/8/2024 7:31:00 AM

This is so deep. It covers a lot of ground of a child's heartache. The verses truly cover the speech of silence. Good luck with the contest.
Date: 5/8/2024 6:16:00 AM

your poem was so evocative, dearest Ink, and a brilliant contest entry. Your metaphors spoke of heartfelt pain from suppressed childhood fears. Reading your words I felt the tormented soul (inner child) and wanted to hug her and carry her way to safety. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara
Date: 5/8/2024 6:09:00 AM

Your poem speaks eloquently to the silence that hides painful secrets and haunting memories that ache through life. Superb diction and splendid metaphors throughout, Ink.---It is in melted muteness, we reveal realness of suppressed pain, as childhood fears scribbled as forbidden secrets~ rewind on repeat through holographic lens of life, mirroring bloodstained fingerprints etched across linen of chastity---A FAVE, indeed!
Date: 5/8/2024 5:17:00 AM

I was just watching a video last night about a Mexican man who left home and came to USA at nine years old due to father being abusive alcoholic. He eventually got into boxing and through that world into drug dealing. His mentor was murdered and he returned home at fifteen to find his mom studying the Bible and home life much different. Long story short he's now a happy man with a nice family of his own. But the tears flowed as he told his story. Anyway, your excellent poem brought that to mind
Date: 5/8/2024 2:15:00 AM

Well written.
Date: 5/8/2024 2:09:00 AM

Insomniac stillness …. That’s where I am … beautiful write .

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