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If Only You Knew

If only you knew the feel of a zephyr,
With its current swooping around hillsides
Ruffling the spruce trees everywhere,
Or descend downwards towards verdant vales
Where flowers bloom all through the year.

If only you knew what the oceans utter
As wonderful waves smash into each other,
Or roll nonchalantly towards the bays,
Destroying sand castles or wiping up
The poor love letters which were written there.

If only you knew the various sounds of Earth,
The laughter of little children playing in our parks,
The parade of grown-ups commemorating feasts,
The sounds of aeroplanes fighting for supremacy,
Whilst on the ground tanks rumble on firing at will.

If only you knew the evil concocted by selfish persons,
Where kindness seems to be at a premium.
Yet I discern others who are compassionate
And help others less fortunate than themselves.
How grateful receivers of good works will be.

If only you knew how many angels fly above
Around the silver stars that orbit in perfect harmony.
Angels that care for this poor land which 
We have ruined successfully through our unwanted trash. 
While food is thrown away when others die in famine and pain.

Copyright © Buhagiar Victor | Year Posted 2024

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Date: 5/17/2024 2:47:00 AM

You've accomplished the English language respectfully, interspersed with immeasurable quality, Victor. Of the two similar phrased I've written--one of 'em is resigned to the Malta Int'l Airport lounge as reading material. Aloha, William
Date: 5/16/2024 10:08:00 PM

So much imagery and feeling, especially the 4th stanza. Good luck... Hugs
Date: 5/16/2024 9:28:00 PM

Your amazing poem highlights the dire consequences of shortsightedness, selfishness and greed. A powerful, well wrought verse. Blessings.
Date: 5/16/2024 5:30:00 PM

You stirred some feelings I have, Victor. If only folks knew, if folks were only more compassionate and less short sighted, if only folks weren't so selfish. Your poem spoke to me of the big picture we all sometimes forget. An evocative poem interlaced with wisdom. Loved it, Victor. Have a great evening, Sara
Date: 5/16/2024 3:18:00 PM

You brought out some good points that are on the front these days. Sometimes we get accustomed to our good life wherever it is or what is it composed of and forget about those less fortunate. Sad that we have so many wars going on at the present if only they could work out a peace treaty. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Date: 5/16/2024 2:47:00 PM

Theres so much in this world that so many are too reluctant to see and seek beyond! What a powerful and profound take on the theme. Your poem is different and very deep and meaningful one that speaks volumes and is soul hitting! You definitely were inspired as always dear victor! A fave this is for me. Best wishes for the contest
Date: 5/16/2024 2:03:00 PM

Victor, apart from evil and selfish people, aeroplanes fighting for supremacy and ground tanks firing at will, I’m sorry for the angels too, I would love to know all the beautiful things you mention in this wonderful free verse poem… Beryl
Date: 5/16/2024 1:17:00 PM

This could be a letter poem to aliens. I am sure they would be interested to know about the many aspects of earth. Well done, Victor.
Date: 5/16/2024 11:03:00 AM

It’s all in here Victor, Nature, war, good, evil, love, greed, and spirituality, all happening at once on this incredible planet, feels like a huge science experiment sometimes, to leave them at it and see what happens, but hey that’s only my agnostic POV, great one for the contest all the best, cheers David
Date: 5/16/2024 10:51:00 AM

Victor this is the best poetry for the If You Only Knew, contest. I love the flow and feel of the zephyr breeze. There is a message behind each peaceful image we all share, then the truth of suffering endured by angels watching over us. Those who help people will be in perfect harmony as well. A winner in my mind xo
Date: 5/16/2024 10:46:00 AM

Delightfully exploring the world around us--your poem brings to fore superb imagery, Victor. A thoughtful journey-- weaving in emotions. I like your message throughout but especially in the last stanza.
Date: 5/16/2024 9:58:00 AM

An awe-inspiring poetry that explores the juxtaposition of beauty and devastation in the earth, Victor, as well as the dichotomy between selfishness and charity. Your work delves into the natural aspects of Earth, human interactions, and moral challenges with vivid imagery and precise language.

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